Thursday, July 10, 2008

A Tiny Conundrum

I’ve had a first line for about a week.  I think it’s a great first line.  So? What am I doing writing first lines anyway?  I’m the retired writer.

But what to do when a beauty of a line comes buzzing into your brain?  Dodge it?  Black it out?  Give it to someone else?  God no.

I went to Word and typed it on the blank page making it no longer blank.  And that’s where it is now.  One line.  No company.

Is it lonely?  Maybe.  But I don’t seem to be able to do anything about it.  I think of that line a lot.  I’ll be making the bed and the line pops into my mind.  It makes me smile.  I wash a dish and I say it silently.

It’s no big deal to have an opening line, you say.  You’re right.  So why am I blathering about it?  You tell me.

5 Comments:

Blogger pattinase (abbott) said...

Hey, like the new pic! It's so bucolic.
Do you usually start that way--with a first line? Or with a character. Or an incident. I think a good first line can set the mood for the whole piece. Your unconscious probably is adding a lot more to it. It just needs to tell the rest of your brain when it's ready. Not that you don't know the process far better than I.

7/10/2008  
Blogger Terrie Farley Moran said...

I think having a great first line is a wonderful thing.

Who knows where it could lead?

Terrie

7/10/2008  
Blogger SLING WORDS aka Joan Reeves said...

I'll pose a question. Is there really such a thing as a retired writer? I think the answer may shed light on why that first line keeps echoing in your mind.

7/11/2008  
Blogger Jess said...

Maybe you really are a retired writer and you're dangling that first line in front of us just to stimulate OUR imagination. :) No?

Come on, there's a second line inside your head just waiting to escape. Let go of it.

7/13/2008  
Blogger Barbara Martin said...

If you're thinking about this one line so much, you should go ahead and finish the story. It's waiting fot you.

7/18/2008  

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